FeatherWeight and Scootaloo Commission

The action of the scene is done well, there's a good sense of motion with the positioning of the characters and the ghosted wings and wisps. The coloration is great, but I would suggest making the shading gradients a bit softer. For example: Featherweight's cheek kind of looks like it has a bit of dirt on it on the ear side of his cheek. The clouds, for a simple background are very nice, and the style of your art is unique and spectacular.

The facial expressions are fitting, and adorable. I would've figured, mentally, that Featherweight (it's Featherweight, I believe, btw) would've been slower. The background is simple, as was ordered. Possibly something more eventful could have happened, but the sky is the sky.

The only other thing I could think to improve/try (at this point) would be figuring out how to have some action in the mane and tail. They're moving fast enough to have wisps in the air, there could possibly be motion there.

Well done, I am looking forward to more business in future! C: